Hello! Welcome back to our last KPIS writers of the year! First of all, thank you so much to Matthew in grade 2/2 and Near in 4/2 for your great responses this week! Everyone keep those replies flooding in!
As this is our last prompt for the year, I’ve been thinking about the New Years, and the ways we are always trying to better ourselves. So… without further ado
KPIS Writers Prompt 13/12/19
How would you describe a fireworks display? Think about the colours, the sounds and your feelings.
I can’t wait to read your responses! Have a fantastic holiday break and a great new year!
-Mr. Josh
a firework it can go stairt up and it will boom also that is great and i so happy as much then it has colors is pink purple green and red and is gone then is again also fun.
If I see a firework it can go different ways, it can go straight ,left or right. And some of them can’t even it can go down to the ground or to the water the color are red and green and yellow or blue. The sound is very loud and noisy I will be so excited and happy to see it and when is no more fire left I can make it again and again and until there is no more left.
Thank you, Crist. Please remember to start each sentence with a capital letter and end each sentence with a full stop.
I think the sound will be very lound and the color of the sky will be color full! Also its gonna be fun for every one in the world!! Also its gonna be the best day ever because its a firework display! And also the firework will be very color full and the party will be very long. Also the fire display also be very betiful,but after its gonna be a big mest . But still the party is fun!
The end.
Yha Yha- I love how you described the firework display as loud and colorful! Those are great sensory details! I also love how you challenged yourself to write more than 3 sentences. Great job! What kind of shapes do you think the fireworks will make?
I see the fire work at New Years it has a lot of color red purple and pink green it’s sounds like boom boom boom and it is like a flower and it beautiful colors
And it is so fun and I like it
I like it noina
Great, Noina! Remember to end your sentences with a full stop.
The firework goes up and BOOM! and then it gone. The colors are red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple, and pink. I think it like a spider web, milky way galaxy, heart, Saturn planet, and a black hole it is very loud and beautiful I like it. It so fun.
Wow! What an imagination, Nine. Don’t forget to use capital letters at the beginning of each sentence.
The fireworks are boom and nice. And…rainbow
it has colors to fireworks is fun
The fireworks is sparkling, glowing and can make a different design with a beautiful colors. like red, yellow, pink, white, green, and oranges and the crackling sounds is scary and noisy,
I’m sorry they scare you, Jaguar. They scare my dog, too. Don’t forget to use capital letters at the beginning of each sentence.
The fireworks looks magic. Fireworks has so many colors. The fireworks looks like a falling star. Fireworks are amazing. Fireworks has lots of shapes like a star, flower and galaxy. Fireworks can make a word for a celebrate.
JinJine 1/1 ^_^
They do look magic, JIn Jine. Great post!
I like fireworks because is make me “happy”!. And I love the colour because is make me “happy”!. I’m scared because the fireworks sound is too loud.
Torfun, I like how you wrote about your feelings. How interesting that we can feel both happy and scared at the same time!
The fireworks display looks stunning. The colors are spectacular and eye catching. The sounds is deafening. I felt overwhelming joy because the fireworks display is gorgeous. All the colors densely pack inside reveal a luminous that touches every receptor in my eye.
Onyx, did you have help with these amazing words? If not, this is fantastic! If you did get help, try to to the next prompt all on your own, ok?
I think the firework will be amazing because it has colorful color with red, pink,white,yellow, orange, blue and loud sound BANG! BANG! Also, there are many colorful fireworks display in the sky at mid night when I celebrate the New Year.
I will feel enjoying to watch beautiful fireworks with my family. I will watch until no fireworks in the sky.
The fireworks pop in the sky like a ball falls into a volcano & explode into 1000000 colors. I imagine to ride on these colors like an angel, that would be so beautiful. The sound is like exploding balloons, what frightens me a little bit.
The fireworks can make many different shape it can be square,circle,heart,star and the color would be a rainbow many different kind of color and the sound will be like boom! Boom! I would feel so happy but a little scared of the sounds.
OSO
Oso- I love how you used a sound word to describe the fireworks! Next time, try writing three full sentences. You can even challenge yourself to write more sentences to go above and beyond!
I went to Pattaya and it have firework. It was fantastic. The sound is very loud. I was so happy.
I think the fireworks are beautiful. I like the colors. The colors are red, green, blue, white, yellow and pink. I think the sound is boom.
Kitty, great job. Maybe next time you can make BOOM a pop out word so that it stands out!
I think when the firework expose it sound like Boom Boom Boom. I wonder what shape of fireworks will be.? It has many colors, there are yellow, red, green, white, pink, blue and a lot of colors. I feel every excited when it splash out.
I also think they are exciting, Preme. Remember to only use one end punctuation for each sentence.
I think fireworks are beautiful and awesome. It like a flower.
Poobpub I like how you compared fireworks to flowers. I agree they are awesome!
I think that the fireworks has a sound like this kaboom with a loud naive .The shape of the fireworks is a line. I felt excited.
Vincent- I love how you used the sound word, kaboom! Is that a loud sound or a soft sound? Also, what colors do you think the fireworks are?
is color is red ,blue ,yelowe , orange ,to ! it sunds like a fire it looks like a dandiliond and I fill happy .
Thanks, Keith. They do look like dandelions sometimes. Remember to use capital letters at the start of each sentence.
It looks like a rocket which quickly rushing in the sky and I saw colorful that look like a blooming flower in the sky. It’s very beautiful.
Nacha- Wow! I love how you described the fireworks! Those are some great similes you used! It really puts a picture into your reader’s mind! Great job!
The fireworks normally beautiful if possible I would like to describe the fireworks to be my name and display it in the colors like a Galaxy with Christmas song, so exciting!!
Praow-That is a really cool idea to have your name spelled out in the fireworks! Next time, remember to write at least 3 sentences.
Firework is rainbow an is can make an unicorn an is can make a shape too.
it is beautiful. But is noisy.
Phing Phing, you remembered many things we see in the fireworks. I would like to see a unicorn one, too!
E
I have seen firework during New Year and some celebrations. I feel surprise to see the big firework. The noise of the firework was so loud KABOOM!! When I looked up the sky, it was so beatiful and colorful like a rainbow. And there were many shapes such as a cloud, a heart, some letters, flowers and butterflies. Then, it got smaller and smaller until it was a tiny star and then POPF! It was gone. See you again firework!
Fireworks come up and we hear boom. The colours are green, red,yellow,blue ,white,orange ,pink and purple.The shapes are star,flowers,writing and numbers. Itmake me feel happy and excited.
Nice work, Hopper. Remember to put a space between words and punctuation marks.
The fireworks are amazing. It looks like a flower with many colour when its up in the sky. The fireworks sound is very loud , when I hear the sound “Boom!!!” I will see sparking light in the sky and its gone and then it comes up again with the Boom sound. I like to see the fireworks with my family.
I like to watch fireworks with my family, too. Great job, TJ!
I think when I smell the air after a firework it lit it smell like rotten eggs!!! I think fireworks contain small amounts of explosives that blow up! I think it explodes with a purple color. I feel happy but I won’t like the smell of rotten eggs though!!
Oak-Oh my! I could clearly picture those fireworks in my mind and smell them! They definitely do have a funky smell after they go off! Great job!
The Fireworks displays like an explosion of million glowing lights. The colour are like rainbow.
Last year I went to see Fireworks at New Year party and what happened to me is I was closing my ears since 3..2..1..Happy New Yearrrrrrr! The fireworks were loud as a nuclear bomb explosion… BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! I keep closing my ears until the Fireworks end and later my arms felt weak. I said “phewwww..” because I felt relief.
This year I decided to celebrate new year at my house without fireworks. How about you?
Matthew- I love how you said that your arms felt weak after covering your ears. You used a lot of strong words like relief and loud. Great job incorporating our author’s craft into your writing! Great job!
I think is going to be very loud!!!!!!!! Maybe its loud as a earthquake. AN THE COLOR WILL BE RAINBOW!!!!!!!!!!!! My feeling will be like,”WOWWWW!!!!!!!” They always scream ”HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!! Is very annoying. But I actually like it. On New Year , I feel excited. FERGIE
Fergie- I love how you compared the fireworks to being as loud as an earthquake! This really helps your readers picture your writing in their head!
I feel happy when I look at the fireworks. It’s bevteful (beautiful) because it has a lot of colers in the sky. I donot like the sound because it’s too lound.
Fireworks are beautiful. It has many colors too. I feel good when I look at the fireworks.
I was in chocolate ville with my mom and my dad. We were there to have dinner.
While bitting my cheese ball, I heard something from the top of the sky. Whoosh! Whoosh! Whoosh! It is very loud but it is cool. The fireworks are colorful. It has blue,red,green and orange colors. Boom! Boom! Boom! There are more fireworks! I feel excite and happy. I hope l can see firework again.
While I’m looking at the fireworks display.I hear a loud sound of fireworks.I hear some people clapping too..I see colorful fireworks like a rainbow.I see people taking pictures.I smell smoke around us because of fireworks.I smell a yummy hotdog because my sister is eating it.I feel excited watching the fireworks and I feel happy too to see a colorful fireworks.
A firework is a colourful art in the sky.
Fireworks also have many different kinds of colours and shape. Fireworks can go left or right. Some fireworks are
different some are big some are small.
I feel very excited to see a firework show Because the sound is so loud like Bang Bang Bang!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It make me so surprise when it getting in to the sky which have many colors.
Japan.
Good job Japan
Thank you.
Good job Japan.
Thank you.
On the Happy New Year, the fireworks will be LOUD. The fireworks will be GREEN, PINK, ORANGE, and YELLOW COLOR. It will also be NEON color. Moreover, it could be the shape of star, tree, or even a people. I wish these will happen on this coming New Year.
The fire work will be very neon and have all color.And it will be 2020 years!!!!It will be fantastic!!!!!!!!!! Day in this world.We will have good dream that it impossible.I will tell you why because th e wish. you will be confuse I knew it.You don’t wants bad dream.
This fireworks for celebration for New year 2020!!!
It’s was so beautiful,and the sound is so loud.
The sky is have colorful!!!! I can’t waiting to see!!!
I have seen fireworks display many many times. When fireworks go up to the sky, I am so excited. They come in many different sizes, colors, and shapes. They can be letter or picjer too. The firework explode with a loud bang. A sound is pung pung pung. I think the fireworks display is amazing. I am so happy to see it and I like it so much.
The fireworks are so loud and is so beautiful and because it have a-lot of color like green,red,blue or other color some are loud and some are not.It will be like BOOM!!!! BOOM!!! Flash !!!!!!!! Or it could be shape like stars and it is so much fun and exciting!!!
A firework is a colorful art in the sky. I feel excited for the firework. The firework sound Bang Bang!¡!¡!¡! firework also have many different kind of colors and shape.
Fire works have many colors, like red, blue, yellow ,pink, orange , golden,grey and white.I feel a little bit scard. Because it’s loud. I see everyone is happy and me too./tam
If I could see fireworks it would have bright colors such as yellow, light-green, light-blue, red.
It will show the numbers: 2,0,2 and 0 and it will happen at mid-night so it could be a countdown.
After it is 1 o’clock in the morning,everybody will celebrate.
I feel beter than happy because I don’t like to sleep early
What I feel about the fireworks is loud and noisy it goes BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! . It was also nice because it has colors. The colors are gold, pink, red, yellow, orange, white, green, purple, and blue. I felt joyful. I know that the sky is dark and black but the fireworks light them up. The shapes are circles.
The firework has many colors and shapes. The fireworks is so loud. When I watch the fireworks I feel happy and I think it is so cool.
The fireworks are so beautiful as there are lots of shapes which made me so glad to see such as flowers, hearts, and rain, all are sparkling by plenty of lines racing up into the sky on and on. Another things that could not take my eyes off is the different shades of colours which could be mixed and turning from one to another one continuously. Even the sound is loud but it is not scared me.