Hi! It’s time for another prompt! But first, Congratulations to Atus and Aom this last week! Great writing!
Can you believe we are almost halfway through the school year? Me neither! I can’t wait for our vacation which starts in just two weeks!!!
Here’s your prompt for this Wintertime!
Writers Prompt 06/12
What would it be like if snow was actually made of marshmallows? If it was soft, sticky, fluffy and sweet stuff? How would you play with your friends and family?
I can’t wait to read your responses!
-Mr. Josh
in the winter i we taste snow when i taste finish it is so good and sweet also very great too at the winter so i can stay at home to eat lunch it is so very good and fresh too.
Great job, Crist. Don’t forget to use a full stop (period) at the end of each sentence, and to capitalize the first word of each sentence. Also, watch out for yellow snow!
If the snow are made of marshmallows . I Will eat and share it to my family. Marshmallows are soft and sweet. We will play a game like throwing and catching marshmallows. Also we will build a marshmallow house together.
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If snow is marshmallow . I would make a marshmallow city. The mashmallow city will have cars , houses , trees, school and parks. I will let my family play with me in the marshmallow city and we will have fun together.
I would like to eat an entire marshmallow city. Great use of commas in the second sentence, Hopper!
If snow in winter was made out of marshmello, I will eat and swallow it all up. The marshmello will be a soft candy.
If snow would be fluffy I will know it’s a marshmello In disky. I will play throw and catch with my family and friends. I know that the marshmello is not sticky so the marshmello will not even stick to my hand or the parts of my body.
Hi Japan – Great ideas! Last time I checked, marshmallows were pretty sticky. Do you think this marshmallow snow would not be sticky? Why not? But if not, that will make for a very fun game with your family and friends.
Good job Japan
I will grab the snow and put it in my mouth and make hot chocolate with it! And I would celebrate marshmallow day with my .Family!
That sounds so yummy Soffia! How would you play with it?
I would make a .Marshmallow man with it ms Violet☺️but it is a big one.
That sounds like a lot of fun Soffia!
If the snow was made of marshmallow definitely all the kids will go out and grab the marshmallow as many as they can, and put it in their mouth. because the marshmallow is sweet and the kids love it. I will tell Jaguar, Shetah, Prom and even my little sister Preme to go outside and have fun with the snowmarshmallow. We will make snowman marshmllow, snowball marshmallow and the last one is shooting marshmallow directly to the mouth and whosoever will win,can get alot of marshmallow for the price,
I will get a plate and i will put it in the ground. Then when the marshmallow fall down I will give it to my mom. Then I will call my friends and I will eat them all.
Bring me some marshmallows, please! Remember that “I” is always capital when talking about yourself.
When it is winter and the snow is the marshmallow I will eat all of marshmallow and I throw play with my family and I make the marshmallow into the snowman.
Sounds fun! Remember to use full stops (periods) to separate sentences. This is a 3 sentence challenge!
If snow made of marshmallow it will be sweet. Everyone will like it. It will be yummy too. I will eat it. I will give it to my friends.
It is so cool Titan I like it so much.
If snow was actually made of marshmallow, I will play with snow by building a snowman and decorate it with marshmallow and when it is time, l will collect the marshmallows and go back home. Then, I will eat marshmallows and play with my kitten at the same time.
I will make snow marshmallow as an ice-cream with cookie and chocolate. And I think marshmallow is a sweet stuff because some marshmallow have sugar in it and a little icing.
Also, I will play with my family by catching and throwing with them and let my family taste to know how delicious it is!!!
Hello pear you write so long.
Hi Pear – Great ideas! Snow marshmallow as an ice cream with cookies and chocolate sounds amazing, I would definitely want to taste that! Nice job starting some of your sentences with transition words. Do you think the marshmallows will melt when you bring it inside like snow can melt?
In winter I will go to khan yai with my family and play in the swimming pool and ride the bike and eat food with my family and running with my family and staying in the hotel and dance in the room and play tik tok with my family and I have fun at khan yai with my family and I stay 3 day and I go home with my family
Do u mean Khao yai? 😀
That sounds like a great holiday. Remember to use full stops (periods) to separate sentences.
I would make a snow ball and play with it. I can also eat it when I’m hungry cause it’s a marshmallow! We could ski on snow with everyone include friends and family. You can put the snow in a bucket and you can pour it to yourself like “ice bucket challenge but a snow”.
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Oso, I love your idea with the marshmallow bucket challenge! That would definitely be less cold than the ice bucket challenge! I think the marshmallows would softly bounce off our heads. Great ideas!
if snow was actually made of marshmallows I will share it with friend family and everyone who knows.
I would eat it all day and I will make a snowman with it . I will fire it to make the road slipirry.
If snow was marshmallows I would eat them and share them with other people, and get some of them to decorate the house with my friends and my family.
Would the ants come and eat your decorations? Great job, Kitty. But remember, this is a 3 sentence challenge!
If snow was actually made of marshmallows. l will put snow and l will sit and jump on it with my family and friends. It is so soft. I will eat it too. Do you think it delicious? It is yummy. I will take my friends and eat with me.
Jade, what do you think would happen to the marshmallows if you jumped on them? Do you think they will become flat or do you think they will bounce you up like a trampoline? And to answer your question, I think marshmallows are delicious too!
If snow was actually made of marshmallows. l will create this marshmallow to be a snowman with my friend and we will together eating during play marshmallows.
Praow, I love the idea of making a snowman with the marshmallows! What other things would you add to your marshmallow snowman for his arms, eyes, nose, mouth, or even a hat? Would you use objects or other kinds of foods?
First time, I see a special snow, I feel excited and surprised because I never have seen the…SNOW THAT MADE FROM MARSHMALLOWS BEFORE! Next, I will go home and get some gloves and then catch it. Why I need the gloves, because it’s very very cold. Yumm…Yumm…Hmm…It’s so chilly in my mouth. I will tell my family to make the chilly candies snow into a sculpture that they like. For me, I will make a battle ship because I like the design and color of the battle ship. Can I color it? Don’t you think it’s so cool that marshmallows fall from the sky? What would you make out of the special snow?
Nice Tatar that is so interesting.
Tatar! So many craft moves – awesome!! You made this a very interesting post with the ellipses, sound words, and questions to the reader. And you used transition words at the beginning of some of your sentences, just like we learned. Great work all around. A marshmallow battleship sounds like a great idea. To answer your questions – yes, I think marshmallows falling from the sky would be very cool, and if I could make anything, I think I would make a marshmallow castle or fort. Do you think the marshmallows could hold up for people to go inside?
If snow was made of marshmallows. I will pick the snow up and we will play snow ball. We will throw the ball and my family and friends will catch it. I know the snow is sticky. It will stick to our hands. I will put the snow out and eat it because it is a marshmallows. Everyone will be excited.
If snow in winter was made out of marshmallows,I will eat them everyday. And I will throw them with my family.
Thanks for sharing Pon Pon! It would be such a treat to be able to eat the marshmallow snow every day. Remember, try to write at least three sentences. Can you think of anything else you would do with the marshmallow snow? Or, how would you feel when eating the snow and throwing with your family?
If the snow was made of Marshmallow, I will share it to my family because sharing is good. I will eat it. I will make a snow city my snow city will have cars, lakes, trees, buildings, houses, and people. I will also play Snowball fight with my family.
Well done, Nine! This is a great post!
I would throw the marshmallow to my friends mouth.Because it is sweet ,fluffy and soft.And I will wouldn’t share the marshmallow to my friends because it’s so yummy food 😋.I will build marshmallow house with my friends and family.
Hi Liger – I think your friends would be very happy to have your throw such sweet treats in their mouths. Did you mean to say that you will share them? A marshmallow house is a great idea! But, do you think it would be strong enough to hold up for people to go inside?
I will eat snowflake and share with my friends and family. It is so yummy that i do not want to eat them all by myself, I want my brother Jade to eat with me. Snow and marshmallow are similar because both can be melted with heat. I really enjoy seeing both getting melted.
Wow, this is so good, Ja Ja! I love how you talked about how marshmallows and snow are similar! Great job!
If the snow are marshmallows , I will build a snow man then, I will eat the marshmallows with my friends and my sister. And I will have a very big party with my friends also I will eat a yummy cookie that I make it with my friends. But it will be a big mess! And also I need to clean the mass after the party, also on Christmas I’m will get a good toy from Santa to!! And then I will eat the snow that are marshmallows!! Then I will play with my friends and my BFF all day to!!!
That sounds like a fun, silly, messy party!! I’m glad that you also mentioned that you will need to clean up the mess! That’s a very responsible move. What do you think is the easiest way to clean up all the marshmallow mess?
Wow! Big mess over there. But good job!!!
I wish that winter turned all snowflakes into marshmallows because I like to eat & lay down on them. I can bounce on them when they are so fluffy & gigantic. They taste yummy, sweet & soft, it’s delicious to feel them melting in my mouth. I could eat them every day!
Hi Kim – These are great ideas! I love that wrote with so many strong, precise words like “bounce,” “gigantic,” and “delicious.” They help me form a picture in my mind of what you are describing. I like how you described the marshmallows as “melting in your mouth” too. That makes me want to eat some marshmallows right now!
Thank you for seeing my comment Dr. Sara 🙂
If snow was marshmallows. I will eat, play and throw them. And we will have a big marshmallow city and many people will visit marshmallow city, we will be sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo poplular. Everything is made of MARSHMALLOWS!!!!!! Think about it! Come on! Ok done. We can eat anything in marshmallow city because it is made of marshmallows and we can eat marshmallows. Right!? Some houses have swimming pools so inside the swimming pool we don’t fill water we fill MARSHMALLOWS!!!!!! (I can’t stop saying marshmallows) @_@
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good Jin Jine.
555, this is fantastic, Jin Jine. I want to live in this city, but I worry about ANTS!
It wood be funny. I will sqiss it and I will eat it to! I will play the mushmelloe with my frends ! I like to play mushmelloes ! it is fun! to day.
It would be funny, Keith. Remember to use all the tools you have to check your spelling. The correct spelling for marshmallows is at the top of the page!
I make pancake with snow and chockalate because it’s fun and is so yummy. We can decorate prices snow too. I will make a snowman with my friends too.
If the marshmallow falls. I will sing raining marshmallow song. Just open your mouth and close your eyes is raining marshmallow. I will get the big box and the marshmallow fall in the box I’ll invite my friends and family to help me grill the BBQ marshmallow! it is YUMMY.
I wish it can be true.
All you need is some chocolate to melt on those marshmallows! Great job, Preme!
If snow was acchually made of marshmallows it would be yucky because for me they are not yummy. But it would be fun because we can play with them. I would use them to buid marshmallow city, marshmallow home and marshmallow car. And I would jump and flip over the snow as the marshmallow is soft and fluffy. I will let my frends and family play too.
i wish in winter marshmallows made of snow like a marshmallows. i like my friend to taste it.
Nice work, Saynine. Sharing is caring. Remember to capitalize the first word in each sentence.
If snow was marshmallows, I would eat some because I am a great food eater especially candies. I would build a marshmallow snowman. I would also play a game, you have to try to throw marshmallows at people’s mouth, if you throw it in, you get a point and the person you throw the marshmallows in get to eat the marshmallows. I also want to make a marshmallow sleigh and slide down from a hill. That would be very fun. I call it the “Marshmallow Land!!!” I love winter and marshmallows and think it will go well together.
LOVE YOU CHRISTMAS!!!
Oak- that sounds like a bunch of fun! I love how you created your own game with it. Great writing!
What I would like it to be is I can make a marshmallow snowman.
Then I will eat them and I would like them even more if they are chocolate. Then I will have even more fun if I build a marshmallow house with my friends and family. Then we will cook the marshmallow and enjoy them together and it also not cold too.
Great ideas Mighty! Oooh chocolate marshmallows sound delicious! A marshmallow house sounds like a lot of fun – do you think you can make one big enough for all your friends and family to fit inside?
Here’s a tip for next time: Try starting your first sentence with words from the original prompt. So you could write – “If snow was actually made of marshmallows, I would make a marshmallow snowman.” What do you think?
If snow is really made of MARSHMALLOWS, I will feel so happy. I will build a snowman that is made of marshmallow. It’s called MARSHMALLOW-MAN. My friends and I can play the ball fight called MARSHMALLOW-BALL. We use marshmallow snow to make the balls. We throw to each others and catch the balls by our mouth and eat it. Who eat the most MARSHMALLOW-BALL win the game. I really want to eat it tomorrow !
Moji- wow! That is some great writing! I love how you challenged yourself and wrote more than three sentences. You are very creative coming up with the different games to play!
If snow is really made Marshmallows , I will do snowman and decorate for eat with my friends.
Pearly- Yummmm! A snowman made of marshmallows sounds very delicious! Next time, remember that this is a three sentence challenge.
If the marshmallows are fall down from the sky as snow. I will grill marshmallow and enjoy with my family. I will build a super yummy snowman and put strawberry on it. I will build a marshmallows house and live in there, I think I can live a little bit and it will be broken.
When I go to school I will play with my friend , we eat marshmallows snow as much as we can and have fun with strawberry marshmallows party.
Awesome, TJ! I like how you knew that a marshmallow house wouldn’t last forever; it would only last a short time.
Nice job Tj but what is the meaning for
grill??????¿?????????????????????????????
Japan,grill means fry.
If snow like a marshmallow I will camping in that place and I will burn the marshmallow and can eat all!!! I will make a ski by MARSHMALLOW and play ski down the BIG MOUNTAIN and it will be so much fun with my friends and family and everything will be MARSHMALLOW!!!!! Except me and everyone that come play here.
Blue- marshmallows are perfect for camping! How long do you think your ski out of marshmallows will last? What do you think it will look like when you are done skiing?
I would invite my friends to my house. We will have a small but warm party. At the party we will eat marshmallow rice, marshmallow drink, marshmallows steak. After that I will start a marshmallow snowball fight by melting marshmallows and throw them at my friends “Splat!!! Splat!!!”. “Ahhh… Ahh…” my friend will say.
Is that sound fun? What party do you think I should celebrate next?
Matthew, I love how you took what we have learned in class about Author’s Craft and included it in your story! Those sound words are very powerful and the detail about it being a warm party is great!
If snow was actually made of marshmallows I will eat them every time that they come down. I will hug them every time too. I will do like that with my family and friends.
I will eat the snow if it the marshmallow. I will play with it super softly.I will make the snowman.I will come to the snowman and push it the chocolate will come out. I will throw the marshmallow than. I will eat it the marshmallow will be soft.I will put the chocolate on my hand and put on my face it will be some much fun and happy it will have so fun it will have the super fun marshmallow it will have some much fun and happy.
Great ideas A-10! Sounds like you will have a lot of fun with this marshmallow snow. Be careful when writing sentences to put your periods at the end of one full thought. Also, try using more transition words at the beginning of your sentences! It will help tie all your thoughts together.
Good job A-10
I will play with my friend.A marshmallow is so soft like a cloud.I like a snowman because is so soft and so yummy.Now I eat a snowman’s eyes and bottom already.
If it has snow in Thailand, I will eat all the snow. But not too much. Especially if it’s FLUFFY!!!!!!! I can put it in an ice creem cone. If it’s sticky, it will be like a slime. That’s mean is fun! If it’s sweet…….. I will jump on it,eat it,sleep on it and never stop!! You like snow man right? But if it’s too hot,you can make a sand man!!!!! (FERGIE)
You Can make A snowman with moshmelo and add.sum thing to look Like snowman
I will make a snow man and will eat it because it is sweet.
I will aso take it home and I will put some in the freezer.
It will be good in Thailand because it hot.
If the snow was made of marshmellows. . .
I will light a fire so I can eat burned marshmellows and throw them in my freind’s mouth.
And for dinner I will have hot marshmellow dog .(hot marshmellow on stick)
Hi Ryuu – very interesting idea! Have you eaten burned marshmallows before? I think you might mean “toasted” marshmallows – that means they are only a little bit burned. I love the idea of a hot marshmallow dog! Did you come up with that idea yourself or have you seen one before?
I said marshmallow dog because I thought of hotdogs🐶🚫🌭✅
I would eat it and make a giant marshmallow man with my teacher and my class.And throw the marshmallow to my class like snow ball fight but this is marshmallow fight.And do a hot coco and eat candy cane with marshmallow. and Lay down on marshmallow.And dream about marshmallow.
If snow was actually made of marshmallows I will eat all the marshmallows. The marshmallows was sticky. Me and my friends started making a snowball then later for a few minutes we are playing a game outside so we were hungry. We build a camp with marshmallows inside. Then we collect the marshmallows in the baskets. We went inside our camp with marshmallows and we ate them. After that we played football and the ball puffy because it was Marshmello. We started to be tried so we got to bed made out of marshmallows.
If the snow are made of marshmallows I will share it with my family and my friends.
We will build a big Castle also have a princess and a prince inside We will build a snowman marshmallows outside the Castle for protect them. We will throw the marshmallows snow and eat together and then we will go eat all everything we build before like a castle,princess,prince and a snowman hahaha It’s yummy I hope my teeth will be alright.😬
If snow was made of marshmallows I will build a snowman and I will destroy it then do a marshmallows fight with my big brother Boom-boom! Then I will eat the marshmallows with my big brother! I will build a house made out of marshmallows! After all of that I will throw 10 marshmallows on my brother head! When I go to school I will put marsh mallows on everybody desk!!!!
If snow was made of marshmallows I will build a snowman and I will destroy it then do a marshmallow fight with my big brother Boom-boom! Then I will eat the marshmallows with my big brother! I will build a house made out of marshmallows! After all of that I will throw 10 marshmallows on my brother head! When I go to school I will put marshmallows on everybody desk!!!!
If snow is made of marshmallows I will get so many bags and run out of the door and I catch them put in the bags.I eat them in the afternoon.And then I will marshmallows to my brother,I think he will be happy and smile. /Tammy 2/1